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Naruto is looking pretty sweet man. Nice work! The only thing I see is that he should have a couple more items.
+Offensive Item – Like bonus to attack or damage would fit in well.
+Defensive Item – Something that has bonuses to Defenses at least.
Total cash value of character should be as close to 1,250,000 as you can. You are about halfway there with your current items so you should be able to add a couple very nice items.
This can be found here: https://atomicrpgsystem.com/character-rewards-experience-treasure/
The only other thing I might add is more character notes with more details on Naruto, references to outside sources etc. So like a wiki, Netflix, or whatever.
Then just make sure you submit all those items and powers along with the character and I will get it approved for you.